The results of my "Need a state" thread...............

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    goathappy New Member

    Oct 5, 2007
    Illinois
    dun dun dun................

    Ok, so for those of you who were wondering what the heck I was doing in the Need a state....... thread here it is. I've had an idea turning over in my head over the past few months and I've decided to put it down and actually try and make something out of it, I've decided to write a novel :) I would sincerely like to thank Lori(sweetgoats) for all the info you've given me on the wonderful state of Colorado :)

    For TGS readers, I'll let you take a sneak peak at the first chapter. Please keep in my this is unedited, my very rough first draft, so if sentences don't make sense don't worry. And I'm not used to writing fiction(I'm still trying to break my highschool report writing habits) so I'm still working on being more descriptive. Please be completely honest and I am openly welcome to strong criticism to help me write better.

    And without further adieu, the first chapter of Never the Same (I haven't named the chapters yet, and paragraph breaks won't show up on her fyi so it looks a little weird)

    DISCLAIMER - the beginning of this story is graphic and may offend some members. IT depicts a murder and I wouldnt want anyone to be offended. Please read with caution ~ Stacey